first draft part 2

Travis W. Edwards
03/26/08
Nicole Hancock
The American Dream.
From the younger generation to the older generation on many ways you have taught us the American dream and in particularly one of the major aspect’s of it, relationship. My hopes and thoughts are going to be laid on the facts that relationships are the best way to find the American dream; So that we can better understand my point of view I will further explain my argument. Most people want money, power, and freedom, but face the facts jack; Most of America does not have any of these or our government is taking them slowly away right out from underneath our nose via the patriot act.
All I herd growing up and what I also hear today was and is “I wish I could have -------” fill in the blank, but all any one needs is family or good friends. It’s proven that people need people. I guess where I’m going with this is money and power do not bring you happiness, sure you will have nice things and people to boss around but trust me the people you do boss around do not like you because you make more money, or you are mean because you have to do your job par say, you caught them slacken off and did the right thing and told them off. If you want better examples just look at all our celebrities, all rich but not all happy. I think that to be truly happy you need a good up rising. We all need to be taught at an early age what the older generation has taught me; love, respect, and to spread what I’ve learned on to younger generations.
I think its funny that we as Americans think that we are free the sad thing is we are not free. Over the last decade or so we have been slowly giving away our rights our freedoms to our government without even fighting for them. Well there is one thing we did fight for and that was our precious liquor, during prohibition. But look at all the other things like the illegalization of marijuana, seatbelt law, wire tap law, patriot act, smoking ban. There are plenty and we let it slide because we think its best for us as a nation that our government is protecting us from ourselves.

Travis W. Edwards
03/26/08
Nicole Hancock
The American Dream.
From the younger generation to the older generation on many ways you have taught us the American dream and in particularly one of the major aspect’s of it, relationship. My hopes and thoughts are going to be laid on the facts that relationships are the best way to find the American dream; So that we can better understand my point of view I will further explain my argument. Most people want money, power, and freedom, but face the facts jack; Most of America does not have any of these or our government is taking them slowly away right out from underneath our nose via the patriot act.
All I herd growing up and what I also hear today was and is “I wish I could have -------” fill in the blank, but all any one needs is family or good friends. It’s proven that people need people. I guess where I’m going with this is money and power do not bring you happiness, sure you will have nice things and people to boss around but trust me the people you do boss around do not like you because you make more money, or you are mean because you have to do your job par say, you caught them slacken off and did the right thing and told them off.

thesis

3. From the younger generation to the older generation on many ways’ you have taught us the entire American dream and in particularly one of the major aspect of it, relationship. My hopes and thoughts are going to be laid on the facts that relationships are the best way to find the American dream, so that we can better understand my point of view.

1. relationships

2. yes its not hard all you have to do is make time for the people you care about and you need to teach the ones that you care about how importint it is to keep a strong relationship.

4. older generation!!!!!

my top ten song list

1.) my number one favorite song has got to be "Good Morning Beautiful" by Steve Holy. this song really touches my heart and its the best pick up there is to a certain someone in your life.

2.) "Paint Me A Birmingham" by Tracy Lawrence is my second favorite song of all time. this song paints a picture of my future dream house and tells a loving wonderful story.

3.) "Our Song" by Taylor Swift comes in number three on my list. this is the song that reminded me of times well spent with my first real relationship and of times never forgotten.

4.) "Whiskey lullaby" by Alison Krauss and Brad Paisley. this song is on my top ten list because it showes us all what happens when it all goes wrong.

5.) "Hey There Dellilah" by Plain White T's. this song also tuches my heart because i have had to many long distance realiships. mabe some day it will afect you all just like it has me.

6.) "Hanging By A Moment" by Lifehouse. wana melt a heart sing this to you certin someone while you dance with them and if there is a conection you will find it. At least thats what i did.

7.) "Skin" by Rascal Flatts is a heart breaker and also seven on my list this is a great song. Explnation, dreams do come true!!!!!!!!!!!!

8.) "Bubbly" by Colbie Caillat. What can i say "where ever where ever you go" i love it. this is another one of thoes songs that paints a picture and i see a girl haven a good time with her bubbly.

9.) "Carry On My Wayward Son" by Kansas all i can say is this is a fun song to play rock on! I played trombone in high scholl and this song was my favorite song to play.

10.) "Follow Me" by Uncle Kracker is my tenth song "because you wont find nobody else like me".