Friday, March 28, 2008

Travis W. Edwards
03/26/08
Nicole Hancock
The American Dream.
From the younger generation to the older generation on many ways you have taught us the American dream and in particularly one of the major aspect’s of it, relationship. My hopes and thoughts are going to be laid on the facts that relationships are the best way to find the American dream; So that we can better understand my point of view I will further explain my argument. Most people want money, power, and freedom, but face the facts jack; Most of America does not have any of these or our government is taking them slowly away right out from underneath our nose via the patriot act.
All I herd growing up and what I also hear today was and is “I wish I could have -------” fill in the blank, but all any one needs is family or good friends. It’s proven that people need people. I guess where I’m going with this is money and power do not bring you happiness, sure you will have nice things and people to boss around but trust me the people you do boss around do not like you because you make more money, or you are mean because you have to do your job par say, you caught them slacken off and did the right thing and told them off.

3 comments:

ARichter367 said...

The part wehere you say i am going to further explain because in the paper they know you are going to do that i dont think you need to tell them.

ARichter367 said...

research giving examples how relationships have helped people through things in life and how it is important can help make your paper better

Nicole Hancock said...

There's not enough here yet for us to really help you out. We need to see you show us how relationships help us through any situation and fill in the gap better than any material item could.